英语一、图画作文

第一段

  • 内容:图画描述+中心总结

  • 步骤:

    1、第一二句话主语从句引出描述原理

    • 范文:

      What is evident is that + 图画描述

      图画描述:

      • 次要动作:sb1 who is adj1 as well as adj2 is doing sth1 in the center of the picture/on the top of the picture, looking extraordinarily adj,

      • 主要动作:sb2, 图片位置的状语/图中位置状语, is doing sth2 , which is 形容动作.

      • 图片位置状语:

        in the four corners of the picture(图片四个角落)

        in the center of the picture(图片的中心)

        in a corner of the picture(在图片的一个角落里)

        on the left/right/top/bottom side of the picture(在图片的左/右/上/下边)

        in the picture/photograph on the left/right(在左/右边的图片里)

      • A,一幅图、一个主体、两个动作

        in the photograph, sb 定语, doing sth(次要动作) 定语/状语,is doing sth(主要动作) 定语/状语.

      • B,一幅图、两个主体、两个动作:形成 对比 就用 but式 ,形成 呼应递进 就是 and式

        in the photograph, sb1 定语 is doing sth1 定语/状语, in the meanwhile(and)/on the contrary(but), sb2 定语 is doing sth2 定语/状语.

      • C,两幅图:形成 对比 就用 but式 ,形成 呼应递进 就是 and式

        in the former photograph, sb1 定语 is doing sth1 定语/状语, in the meanwhile(and)/on the contrary(but), in the latter one, sb2 定语 is doing sth2 定语/状语

      sb

      an adult、a girl、a boy、a male、a female、another

      如果能够描述职业什么的最好,sporter等等的

      定语

      • 形容词1 as well as 形容词2:翻译成 1且2的,用来描述sb

      • 形容词1、2:

        褒义词:

        • 形容外貌的:cute, lovely; little; graceful elegant; young;
        • 形容态度的:confident, energetic, optimistic, ambitious
        • 万能的:who looks evidently impressive to readers. (给读者留下深刻印象的)

        贬义词:

        • 形容词:fat, cruel, ugly, pessimistic, uncourteous, short-sighted, double-faced, contemptible, hot-tempered, terrible
        • 万能的:who leaves a bad impression to readers

    2、第三句话引出文章中心的过渡段

    • 范文:

      The symbolic meaning of the cartoon(s) is quite self-evident: + 文章中心

    3、第四句话,总结文章中心

    • 范文:

      1、sth ought (not) to be done by sb, 非限制性定语从句:否定就加not,ought不用加s

      sb:human beings(人类), teenagers and youngsters(所有人), undergraduates/graduates(在校生/毕业生), all children and adults(所有人), customers(消费者),

      sth: 文章的中心,可能是动名词做主语(保护环境),可能是名词(自信,孝敬)

      2、It is sth that keep(s) as indispensable as sunshine, 非限制性定语从句

      It is sth that keep(s) as severe as drugs, 非限制性定语从句

      非限制性定语句:which has attracted the attention of all walks of life recently.

第二段

  • 内容:原因

  • 步骤:

    1、第一句话:引出原因分析

    • It keeps my perspective that the issue has its deep roots as fall follows

    2、三个原因:

    First of all, not only(倒装) … but also … . Additionally, “…”, said Masami Horri from an organization in Japan devoted to natural(social) science research. Last but not least, 虚拟语气(可排比).

    • not only … but also … :

      倒装就是把 not only 放到句首,然后后面这句话是一般疑问句,紧接着but also就是正常句型

      not only does he looks poor, but also …

    • “”:名人名言,自己编,推荐几句,推荐去迪迦奥特曼看吧

      It’s hard for humans to stop using what they’re used to. :人类很难放下他们习惯使用的东西

      Relationships need to be maintained by everyone’s actions.:人际关系需要靠每个人来维持的,人际关系可以更换

      I’m just doing what I’m supposed to do as a human being. :我只是在做我作为一个人应该做的事

      It is the consensus of nature(society) that + :这是自然界的共识

    • 虚拟语气

      一个句子应该是主将从现,把所有的谓语动词变成过去式,就是虚拟语气;be动词的过去式只有were

      If …, sb might do sth1, do sth2.

      If one …, he or she might achieve nothing until the end of his or her life.

      推荐语句

      • If sb is still done, future generations/their offspring would imitate their behavior, and the earth would face…:如果人类依然怎么做的话,人类的后代也会模仿行为,再接一句

第三段

  • 内容:总结句+具体措施+反问

  • 步骤

    1、第一句:总结

    • It is 强调 that …

    2、第二句:具体措施(太多就不写)

    • It is urgent that …

    3、第三句:反问句

    • What will happen in the future if human beings insist on (not) doing it? 如果人类坚持做(不做)。。。的话,未来会怎么样呢?

英语一、小作文

公务书信

  • 开头写:Dear Sir or Madam:/Dear 文中给出的人名:

  • 第一段:自我介绍+写作目的

    文中给出自我介绍:I’m an undergraduate student/teacher from …

    文中没有给出:I am an undergraduate from the Department of Electronic Science and Technology.

    I am writing this letter, to be honest, to tell you about why/what/the thing + 目的

  • 第二段:文中给出要求,就按照要求写,50words左右

    First of all, so … that …(倒装), although(让步). Additionally, 强调句型, which 非限定从句 + 结果. At last, 虚拟语气.

    倒装 : so + adj be there 名词 that …(表示有什么)

    结果:一般都是加s,因为是which

    • prevent(s) us from doing:这阻止、导致了我们不能做某事
    • cause(s) dissatisfaction among + 名词:这引起了…的不满意
  • 第三段:

    文中有额外要求(道歉、致谢等):要求+期待回复

    文中没有额外要求的:感谢来信/表示提议+期待回复

    表示感谢:I take this opportunity to express my sincere appreciation for your letter

    表示提议:I take this opportunity to express my sincere proposal:表示我真诚的提议

    期待回复:I look forward to your reply if it is convenient for you

  • 落款:写右边,Yours \n Liming

私人书信

  • 开头写:Dear + 文中已经给出

  • 第一段:问候语+写作目的

    问候语:Is your recent life and study(work) as usual?

    写作目的:I am writing the letter, to be honest, too + 写作目的

  • 第二段:与公务书信完全相同

  • 第三段:

    文中没有要求:祝福语+期待回信

    文中做出要求:要求+祝福语

    祝福语:Sincerely wish you all the best in life and study(work).

    期待回信:同上面

告示文章

  • 标题(第一行中间)

  • 第一段:写作目的+具体论述

    we are to … , 具体论述同公务书信

  • 第二段:欢迎加入+练习方式

    Welcome to join us, we sincerely look forward to your arrival. If you are already willing to join us, please email us at xxxx@com.cn/ call us at 1xxxxxx.

英语四六级作文

第一段

Nowadays, more and more social phenomena that [从句] are captured by our eyes in our lives. As far as I’m concerned there is nothing more reasonable than that sth ought (not) to be done by sb.

第二段

同英语一的第二段

第三段

同英语一的第三段

范文

Nowadays, more and more social phenomena that there is a mass of misunderstandings between parents and children are captured by our eyes in our lives. As far as I’m concerned there is nothing better than that more communication ought to be made by parents and children.

It keeps my perspective that the issue has its deep roots as fall follows. First of all, not only can communication help seek similar opinions between parents and children, but also reduce opposing views. Additionally, “Parents should be active in communication with their children, not wait,” said Masami Horri from an organization in Japan devoted to social science research. Last but not least, if there were more communication, parents and children would be friends soon.

It is communication that plays a great role in promoting relationships. What will happen in the future if parents insist on not communicating with their children?

要点

  • 插入语(谓语)
  • 被动
  • 强调句
  • 倒装
  • 虚拟语气
  • 排比(子数不够可凑)
  • 非限制性定语从句

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